Feedback on the first draft of the website

From the feedback i received, i had a number of corrections to be made to the website. One improvement i had to make was to create a page which gave a short profile on each of the band members. For example, more indication of a male member in the band as the singer is male.Another issue i have to address is giving more indication on how the audience can contact the band. I needed to follow my statement of intent more tightly to match my target audience. Having a music page with my other AV content will also match my statement of intent.